Prep Market 2016

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My Pageviews

Yay Thanks to the people that have been looking at my blog I have over 5000 views.  That makes me really happy because it tells me that people like to come and look to see what I have done and what I have been doing.  I can't wait till I get up to 10,000 I'm going to try catch up to my class blog.  Thanks to all the people that have looked at my blog and thanks if you left a comment.  I have people come look at my blog from the United States, New Zealand, France, United Kingdom, India, Denmark, Philippines and Ukraine Most people look at my blog from the United States.  

Olympic Slide 2016

Comment On Rimu Team Blog Ka Piopio - Kapa Haka & Kiwileles.

Hello Rimu Team, I am Havana from Rangikura School

I really enjoyed watching your Ka Piopio - Kapa Haka & Kiwileles.  You had some great moves/actions and very nice singing.  I saw that you made some mistakes but that's ok because it's normal and also everyone makes mistakes.  Lastly, I heard some background music it sounded nice and relaxing.


 

Kind regards

Havana

http://rangikura-sb-havana.blogspot.co.nz/  

My Book Review

 My Book Review!

Title:	Diary Of A Wimpy Kid The Third Wheel
Author:	Jeff Kinney
Illustrator:	Jeff Kinney
Story Line:	Greg Heffley is struggling to find a date to the valentines dance.  He gets his best friend to be his wing man to help him find a date.  He is worried that he will be left out and won't get a date.

What I liked best: My best part was when Greg Heffley got his dad's old leather jacket and wore it to school when his mum wasn't looking and later on at school he got all the attention suddenly his mum pounded on the door and took it of him and he had to go home in his mums dressing gown.

What I didn't like: There wasn't a part that i didn't like.

Favourite character and why? My favourite Character is Greg Heffley because he is funny he likes to play video games and he is weird.

Would I recommend this book? Yes I would recommend this book, in fact I would recommend all of the Diary Of A Wimpy Kid books/movies because they are good kids books easy to read funny.

Swimming Cerificates

 

These are my swimming certificates, I came first in breaststroke and second in backstroke.  We had to do freestyle and backstroke and if you wanted you could do breaststroke and butterfly.  I did breaststroke freestyle and backstroke some people had to do flutter board but I didn't.

On my first race it was freestyle I had a little bit of a sore tummy.  As one of the teachers blew the whistle (that meant go) I took a deep breath I freestyle all the way to the end racing my opponents.  The next race was backstroke I heard the whistle and race my appointments all the why to the end.  Now its my final race Brest stroke.  I hoped it the pool and waited for the whistle to go suddenly I heard it so I swam to the end and I was supersized because I came first.

Tips For Swimming:
Just race to the end
Do not look behind you

Moment In Time Week 7

Today our teacher asked us to write a ‘Moment In Time’ piece using a picture of a boy in the water.  We planned as a class to make sure we had the 5 W’s and the 6 Senses.  

Before we began our writing in small groups we discussed the importance of using descriptive writing, using similes and metaphors where appropriate, using dialogue and have done our best to make sure our punctuation is correct.  Some of us have even used ‘Show Don’t Tell’ in our writing to provide our reader with more of an experience.

Our teacher gave us 10 minutes for each paragraph and then 10 minutes for editing at the end.  We had so much fun working together!

If you have a moment, we would love you to comment on our writing.  

Boy Overboard!

Jack was heaving on his rod but it was stuck, he kept heaving and heaving he looked down to see where it was stuck, he leaned over to much and he face planted in the icy cold water gasping for air, he could feel sharks bumping into him and he could feel the fins under his feet, Jack was frightened.  He heard the boat slowly moving away from him, “Help! Help!” he cried.

Nobody could hear Jack’s lonely call.  Jack could smell the diesel engine moving further and further away.  Jack started to give up his hopes, goosebumps started forming on the sides of his arms.  He didn't know what to do…he said to himself “I don't want to die this way” with a frown on his face and tear in his eye.

He could feel the sharks getting closer and closer to him, a shark pounced out of the water and bit his shoulder, he could hear the bone shattering into a millions of pieces, Jack sunk to the bottom of the deep blue sea slowly rising up to the top.  “I’m alive!” Jack shouted.  Jack had one arm but he was still grateful that he was alive…    

Written by Havana and Sonia.

Sonia:

I think I did well with giving ideas and fixing our punctuation.  I also learnt new words like heaving and pounced.  I had a lot of fun.  

Havana:

I think I did well with my ideas, editing and fixing our work.  I we both did well making the story interesting.  I learnt words like heaving and diesel engine.  I had fun.