Here is a selection of my learning that I wish to share. Not all my work will be perfect all of the time as I am a work in progress. I welcome positive and helpful comments.
This a really good google slide. I liked how you put your point of view on question number one because it is really great. I love the pictures and backgrounds because they match the words and they go together too. You put a lot of detail into your work and that is how it makes your story good. But also make sure you check for mistakes and see if it makes sense. Other than that you did really well.
Yours sincerely Mereana
My blog: http://rangikura-sb-mereana.blogspot.co.nz/
Hi Havana, I really like your Olympic google slide in your presentation you used really strong sentences That describes your side of the argument well. I was just wondering where you got your thank you page from but i did not find a reference maybe next put the reference in the slide . But to be honest I really like slide seven you described Sarah Walker really well and now I know who she by just reading slide seven. From Daisy Rangikura school http://rangikura-sb-daisy.blogspot.co.nz/
Hi Havana.
ReplyDeleteThis a really good google slide. I liked how you put your point of view on question number one because it is really great. I love the pictures and backgrounds because they match the words and they go together too. You put a lot of detail into your work and that is how it makes your story good. But also make sure you check for mistakes and see if it makes sense. Other than that you did really well.
Yours sincerely
Mereana
My blog:
http://rangikura-sb-mereana.blogspot.co.nz/
Hi Havana,
ReplyDeleteI really like your Olympic google slide in your presentation you used really strong sentences That describes your side of the argument well. I was just wondering where you got your thank you page from but i did not find a reference maybe next put the reference in the slide . But to be honest I really like slide seven you described Sarah Walker really well and now I know who she by just reading slide seven.
From
Daisy
Rangikura school
http://rangikura-sb-daisy.blogspot.co.nz/